~ I Watch I Watch I Watch ~ Poem by MS. NIVEDITA BAGCHI SPC. UK.

~ I Watch I Watch I Watch ~

Rating: 4.6


~ I WATCH I WATCH I WATCH ~
Ms. Nivedita. UK
17.09.09.

Ye,
You’re standing in the:
Endless Universe,
Endless Dark,
Endless Light.

Ye,
You’re standing beyond the:
Boundaries of Life and Death.

Ye,
Silent Universe
Silent Dark,
Silent Light
Embosom Your foot prints
When minstrel oozing
From Your harp.

Achefully Joyfully
I watch I watch I watch
Without any utterance
Without any hope.

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COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sayantan Dutta 21 May 2010

'A softly sunken vision, the bottomless pit of darkness Mortals dare to look beyond the abysmal end Riding thy myriad ways of guiltless germination Capitulating under disgrace, yet amazed by the trend' I am sorry this is a bit sarcastically nasty maybe, but your poem encapsulates the entire universe, and my mind.

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Amrit Rathi 24 May 2010

A mystical poem with charm and beauty of silence, very well written! I rate 10/10

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Rajaram Ramachandran 28 May 2010

Sometime situations go beyond our control when we have to simply watch, watch and watch out of frustration.

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Dr Antony Theodore 28 May 2010

You’re standing in the: Endless Universe, Endless Dark, Endless Light. very great imagination.. thinking of the universe from this planet earth. thank you for ur meditation

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Unwritten Soul 30 July 2010

Cooooooooooooool! make me chill because too cooold and cool...love this, u know what, i think ur imagination and reality are twin...identical twin, different but reflective...you always know how to attract people to read...like i said before u are exhibiting your drawing of mind into a piece of chain word...still beautiful without color! 10/10...

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Suresh Kumar Ek 14 September 2020

poetic art at the highest

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Bharati Nayak 16 September 2018

Ye, Silent Universe Silent Dark, Silent Light Embosom Your foot prints When minstrel oozing From Your harp. Achefully Joyfully I watch I watch I watch Without any utterance Without any hope. - - -A mesmerizing piece of writing.

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Sranisha Francis 21 September 2015

very good words...........

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Melvina Germain 28 June 2015

I'm definitely immersed within the universe and to me that is a Blessing as there is much to love and share. The beyond has always been intriguing to me. Excellent poem Nivedita.....

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lost soul 03 May 2011

I can identify with your feelings for I am indeed 'a lost soul' 'standing beyond the boundaries of Life and Death' and yes- I watch I watch I watch Without any utterance Without any hope.' your poem has an erie quality to it, very effective

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