I Whisper My Love......... Poem by Kolitha Lelwala

I Whisper My Love.........

Rating: 5.0


My sacred love......
like a bubble in a running stream
really like nectar in a withering flower

I whisper my love....

Rolling over boulders
sighing with the breeze
floating in the clouds
whisper my love

Creeping through blue hills
bathing in the rays of moon
in a silent cold night
I whisper my love

Up in giant willow trees
chirping with grasshoppers
embracing the dew
mixing with my eye's 'dew'

I whisper my love to you.............

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 30 October 2006

Very nice imagery in this one. A whisper is more subtle than a shout. Fine work, Kolitha. Regards, Sandra

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Nimal Dunuhinga 30 October 2006

Definitely somebody would hear your whisper as it's so adventurous and melodious.

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