I Will Be Back Soon Poem by akram saqib

I Will Be Back Soon

Rating: 4.0


A letter from you
I get just now
Wish me come back
But tell me how?
In reply I say
Gloomy are my nights
And dreadful day
I too feel
Like fish out of water
But am to kneel
If I return
Think a little bit
Who will earn
The eyes that wait
Of our siblings
Fixed upon the gate
Nothing has I
Except your love
But can not buy
Livelihood I earn
My family for
I too yearn
I’ll be back home
After some time
Then shall we roam

Wait until then
I pile up a coffer
And return when

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Muhammad Ali 15 May 2009

lovely poem Akram... very nice one so simple, so smooth and so soft... yes it is love. 10.. Ali

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Bele Lele 13 August 2009

Ill give this a 10..

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Shams Tahir 12 June 2009

love expressed in great nostalgic manners

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Aarif Ameen 17 May 2009

ten + i liked it good luck

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Shweta Advani 17 May 2009

ur poem rings with so much truth...we forget to make a life coz we r engulfed in making a living...10

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Ashraful Musaddeq 15 May 2009

Lovely and soft, silky 10++

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