A lovely poem about stolen love. When we love and then we lost
we always take a part of that love with us. Then at times we will
call to mind some of the very special feelings we had for that person.
Very romantic, felt the words.
Enjoyed this poem and others. I didn't know there was a catagory Member Poem of The Day, but got an email saying I'd been chosen for April 12th. That's how I found you. Just finished a book I think you'd enjoy if you haven't read it, Ambition and Survival, Becoming a Poet by Chrisitian Wiman. Have a nice day and keep writing! RL
aside from any potential message, let us examine the structure of your poem:
you lack a certain meter but that in an of itself doesn't make a poem bad, what your poem lacks to be great is that certain flow, a composed use of poetic building blocks, in order to compensate for the lack of meter or rhyme. any such alliteration added or less anastrophe used would go a long way in your works
Sweetest ink for today, peaceful piece..i like this art very much..a bit sorrow at the end when bye flying between each other...but the sweet mind by your words bring all soul back to home, home of peace! keep writing! ! the nice hand must Never know how to stop write-Unwritten Soul