Treasure Island

Yasser Koor


I will Survive..


Every time I see a couple I remember her
Every day when people meet I remember her
Every single night I walk alone out there
How can I forget her body how can I forget the hair
I hated where she lives I hated everywhere
But now if she comes back to me, , , really I don’t care
I try to revitalize myself again I try to forget her

So I sit alone with my pain
Smoking weed and wait
Waiting for the end of her reign
‘Cause I faced when she left me
A wither red rose in the rain
So I swore to the goodness
That I’ll never enchain
Would her dark nail,
Be pushed through my veins again?

Submitted: Tuesday, September 30, 2008
Edited: Wednesday, October 01, 2008

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  • Salu Salu (12/3/2008 11:23:00 AM)

    yasser, in the world in the life one encounters a lot of oddities that make the fun of living.....accept as it comes then you'll find it blessing....we experience a lot of amazings wonders unusuals....later all become no wonder no amazing no unusual...... experience all moods......best wishes/salu (Report) Reply

  • &&angel4ever && (10/14/2008 6:04:00 AM)

    As it said nopain no gain so you have to feel it to know whats happiness and at the end of the tannel there is light and hope you have to believe it (Report) Reply

  • Blue Eyes (10/11/2008 11:53:00 AM)

    what can be said about such about a poem that led
    me crying into bed
    waw, i mean its great (Report) Reply

  • Kesav Easwaran (10/8/2008 11:37:00 PM)

    a good write 'strong willed' on survival...emotions well expressed in well framed lines...good work, Yasser...10 (Report) Reply

  • Shimon Weinroth (10/8/2008 11:34:00 PM)

    I am sure you will survive, a poem of urgent emotions that you seem to come to grips with, do cntinue your search,10
    (do you mean enchain or un chain) ? a poets right to coin new words (Report) Reply

  • Little Hatila ;) (10/8/2008 6:01:00 PM)

    wow...you can forget about her for sure, let her go

    i think this poem is a piece of gold...keep going
    10

    Hataw (Report) Reply

  • Mohammad Al-kurdi (10/5/2008 9:33:00 AM)

    what other words should be said
    to someone knows that life has no end
    when a person leave him 'dead'...

    i say no drink no weed 'cause you say'But now if she comes back to me, , , really I don’t care '

    well-done piece of writing dude...............keep working. (Report) Reply

  • Anjali Sinha (9/30/2008 9:59:00 PM)

    very nice poem
    but please dont take to weed
    +10 regards anjalie
    (do read mine ALL I SEE IS YOU
    and others) (Report) Reply

  • Shimon Weinroth (9/30/2008 8:09:00 PM)

    filled with the agony of love's emotions, interesting do continue,
    there are some minor spelling mistakes do check them out


    cheer up (Report) Reply

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