I Will Wait Forever Poem by thepto ...

I Will Wait Forever

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onceyou come in my life
just like a shooting stars
i dnt know why butyou stole my heart away
you always teach me good thing
you bring happiness in my life
i wonder how but
you never let me down
at this time i fell so lonely
you are no more here with me
only this soft pillow
which helps me to absorbed my tears
i pretend that i dont care infront of youbut inside me i am crying like little baby
i want to know the reason why u leave me
i never imagine what types of my life will be
without youcoz you are always there with me whenever i need
if u want to come back my door is always open
i will wait your response forever
i know this word forever is so long
but i can handle each and every steps
i wish you will come back to me
and promise me we will forever......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jazib Kamalvi 23 October 2017

A sublime start with a nice poem, Thepto. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.

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Paul Brookes 19 August 2013

A good poem shame about the poor grammar and the use of U, coz which is lazy. That said interesting rhythms and syntax. BB : O)

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