I Wish Poem by Practicing Poetess

I Wish

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I wish that we could take a walk
Together, holding hands, and talk
And share in viewing the same sights
Enjoying days, and starlit nights
I wish that it would never end
And we would be forever friends
As sunsets fade from pink to grey
We'd watch the ending of each day
Until the morning light crept in,
A new adventure to begin.

Friday, December 14, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: together
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
... And then, we'd do it all again!

poem written 12-11-2018
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 04 March 2019

Enjoying days, and starlit nights I wish that it would never end And we would be forever friends..ready for a new adventure in a new morn.. love your poems of deep desire. tony

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Practicing Poetess 04 March 2019

Thank you so much, Dr. Tony, for such a positive comment! : -)

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Louis Rams 15 December 2018

together we would walk and talk and take in all the sights and pray for joy and happiness with all our might.

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Practicing Poetess 15 December 2018

Thanks, Louis! I don't think praying for joy & happiness would be necessary- - I think the joy & happiness would already be present! : -)

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