I Wish Poem by Twilight Whispers

I Wish

Rating: 5.0


You read my thoughts through misty eyes,

Like thunder threatens sunny skies,

You think you know what's wrong with me,

You don't - you won't set me free,

You tell me that I'll be okay,

That the sun will come out again one day,

But do I believe you? Do I trust you?

Do I have faith enough to even come near you?

You're trying to control me, you're trying to win,

You're stealing my happiness and warmth within,


I wish, you would leave me alone.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sallie Howson 06 May 2007

well done...the beginnings of a future poet i'm sure

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Brian Dorn 24 April 2007

Good write, Becky... well composed and brilliantly worded! Brian

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Dark Light 24 April 2007

I love this poem A very nice one at that Keep writing Ill keep reading Darklight

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