I Wish That Favours Were Returned Poem by Aden Orie
I Wish That Favours Were Returned
I open doors for them,
they slam them in my face,
sometimes i get angry,
but allways open doors,
its turning me into someone,
that i dont want to be,
all these days opening doors,
and what have they done for me.
Good poem. You express how we all feel. Keep writing. You're doing great.
Good poem. You express how we all feel. Keep writing. You're doing great.
Good poem. You express how we all feel. Keep writing. You're doing great.
Such discourteous behaviour of others do disturb young minds-a short and impressive poem.
I was feeling the emotions you describe in your poem and then read the words of Sai Baba: those who ask for love in return are coolies demanding wages Yet it is our nature to want love returned
Those whom watch they see eyes are every where...you have it going on I say...Thank you..
I don't know why pple get so shocked when young pple show talent and insight in their writing like you have. I'm always doing thankless favors, I know just what you mean. Lovely poem, Aden. X's and O's
Aden, you have good writing talent. Keep up the fine work....! ! ! Regards, Trade.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Good poem. You express how we all feel. Keep writing. You're doing great.