Ali Sabry

Rookie - 77 Points (11/8/1988 / Iraq - Baghdad)

(((I Wish You Weren't In So Much Pain))) Poem by Ali Sabry


I wish you weren't in so much pain,
But on a beach with us in Spain.
You've always been the one that's funny,
I'm not here to take your money.

A lovely lady, Grandma you are,
In all our lives, you are the star.
So many things we've learned from you,
What's that recipe for that stew?

We just hope you feel much better,
You don't have email, so here's this letter.
We love you so much, we adore,
Even when you sleep and snore.

Submitted: Sunday, September 22, 2013
Edited: Monday, September 23, 2013

Do you like this poem?
0 person liked.
0 person did not like.

Form:


Read this poem in other languages

This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.

I would like to translate this poem »

word flags

What do you think this poem is about?

Poet's Notes about The Poem

(((I Wish You Weren't In So Much Pain)))

Comments about this poem ((((I Wish You Weren't In So Much Pain))) by Ali Sabry )

  • Rookie - 38 Points Ifeanyi Eze (4/12/2014 4:50:00 AM)

    A very lovely and wonderful poem, I love it..keep it up (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 25,009 Points Gangadharan Nair Pulingat (4/10/2014 10:01:00 AM)

    In this world of modern living often the youth forget to give suitable attention to the old parents and grandmas and near dear old ones where the poet's mind have a glimpse. A good poem to read and understand where email like facilities are missing to the old ones owing to their incapacity I think.The poet had well done through the subject of choice in the poem and he deserves approval of readers in this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Mikita King (2/22/2014 12:36:00 PM)

    Ahh, grandmothers. Hopefully if she was asleep she wasn't in too much pain for a while. Very skilful rhyming and meter. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 54 Points Smile :) (2/18/2014 3:29:00 PM)

    rhymy touchy and expressive, it's simple and so sweet
    GO ON! ! :) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 31 Points Word Binder (1/22/2014 12:18:00 PM)

    I love the flow, the regular rhyme scheme.Keep it up (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 20 Points Kay Tee (12/31/2013 12:50:00 AM)

    so sweet, grandmas are the best (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Amanda Sanchez (11/28/2013 9:26:00 AM)

    Light hearted and kind, I like this write (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ogunwuyi Paul Olufemmy (11/22/2013 4:33:00 AM)

    You've got a unique rhyming style. Good flows too. I have a similar style too. Well done. I wish grandma safe recovery. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Sam Smith (11/22/2013 12:12:00 AM)

    honestly, this is such a cute poem. I have never thought to make one about grandparents. your a romantic poet, for the poem you make and a creative one at that. i am a little envious of your creativity. but this is a good poem. you have more good ones. but in my opinion this will be my favorite. keep up the good work. I hope I get to see you blossom. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Robin Dyer (11/19/2013 2:28:00 PM)

    this is very cute! i love how simple and tasteful
    i wish i had his talent for ryming (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 51 Points Samar Sudha (11/15/2013 9:46:00 PM)

    Its nice Man! Showing love for your Grandy... wish mine too near by me and could have quite same thoughts... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Raven Skye (11/14/2013 4:41:00 PM)

    This poem is easy and natural in it's rhyme. I like how it's simplicity doesn't ruin it, and you've used many examples to describe the grandmother. Well done, it was a nice read. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 183 Points John Rickell (11/8/2013 1:19:00 AM)

    I enjoyed reading this sincere poem, brought back memories Thankyou (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tracy L Chavalala (11/4/2013 8:00:00 AM)

    Really wow... It is a beautiful poem, made me think of my own late gran. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Dipy Hermonite (10/3/2013 3:12:00 AM)

    Soul rending poem. Loved it. Thanks for sharing. Have rated it.

    Could I request you to read and rate my poem? I would also be delighted if you could endorse your comments on the poem.
    Link is given below

    http: //www.poemhunter.com/contest-vote/your-world-my-lord/
    Regards
    Dipy (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,908 Points Soulful Heart (10/1/2013 1:54:00 AM)

    reminding the winter of our life thats just a stone throws way..............a good wish and poignant (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Unbreakable Heart (9/28/2013 2:33:00 AM)

    This poem really makes me remind of my Grandma who taught me some poems and I actually appreciated her love to me. She was the one who took good care of me when parents were out. I definitely enjoyed her company..

    Thanks for this poem. For sure one of this days I will visit her, bring flowers and light up a candle for her.. (Report) Reply

Read all 17 comments »

Famous Poems

  1. Phenomenal Woman
    Maya Angelou
  2. Still I Rise
    Maya Angelou
  3. The Road Not Taken
    Robert Frost
  4. If You Forget Me
    Pablo Neruda
  5. Dreams
    Langston Hughes
  6. Annabel Lee
    Edgar Allan Poe
  7. Caged Bird
    Maya Angelou
  8. If
    Rudyard Kipling
  9. Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening
    Robert Frost
  10. A Dream Within A Dream
    Edgar Allan Poe
Trending Poets
Trending Poems
  1. Still I Rise, Maya Angelou
  2. The Road Not Taken, Robert Frost
  3. Phenomenal Woman, Maya Angelou
  4. Dreams, Langston Hughes
  5. If You Forget Me, Pablo Neruda
  6. Fire and Ice, Robert Frost
  7. If, Rudyard Kipling
  8. Annabel Lee, Edgar Allan Poe
  9. A Dream Within A Dream, Edgar Allan Poe
  10. Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening, Robert Frost
[Hata Bildir]