I Woke Alone Poem by John Kipling Lewis

I Woke Alone

Rating: 3.4


I woke alone,
ignorant of your absence.
I woke alone,
knowing what I can not have.
I will wake alone,
remembering what could have been.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
K Holoholo 05 November 2007

I like this one too, nice and simple and you get the point. Nice job! ! !

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Kath Moore 05 November 2007

2. This does not work either. It's all general and abstract. There is nothing that conveys any specific experience. And the point of poetry is to convey specific experience.

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C Smith 05 November 2007

remember a girl, makes me feel so sad

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Shadow Soul 05 February 2007

Nice. Reminds me of a girl i know.

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