Iam Loving You, Poem by Abdul Karim

Iam Loving You,



Iam loving you,
Iam loving you,
It's a fact not denied,
Every breathe is a blessed calling,
Understand that concept,
Hold on that love that is Higher than ever,
Forever we are all together.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 06 February 2009

Again, this is the same formula for success. Repetition at the beginning. A good construction. The last line is weaker but still, OK. GW62

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