Ice Cream Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

Ice Cream

Rating: 4.6


A sleepy little village, quiet
You look out the window
Daydreaming
In your eyes disquiet

So many sleepless nights
I have dreams about you
I must get some sleep
To dream you true

I awaken at dawn
To find you beside me
I'm still half asleep
Keep me awake blue sea

Being soul mate
This is
More than a pipe dream
Oh dreamy blue eyes
Give me an ice cream!

(2008/12/19)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Linda Winchell 18 December 2008

While Ice Cream is fattening, this is a sweet poem to lick your lips upon! Ten, Linda

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Chitra - 19 December 2008

I must get some sleep To dream you true, lovely lines hope this dreamy icecream never ever melts

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Estrella Baldemosa 19 December 2008

romantic...i love it.

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M M 19 December 2008

When the world becomes all sweetness... Very beautiful! 10!

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Persian, when I found the title Ice Cream I knew it would be a special poem. I treat for you to bring you some solace for loving so much. Beautifully written. 10 Karin Anderson

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Little Morning Star 21 December 2008

I'm startled with the ending.. nice work..

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Reihaneh Jalalian 20 December 2008

your poem really made me laugh. a really nice start with a wonderful ending. beautiful

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C. P. Sharma 19 December 2008

I love the dreamy blue eyes more than ice cream. CP

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Tsira Goge 19 December 2008

This is pleasant to me sad poems on loneliness... Very beautifully write, Nightingale..10 Tsira

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