Persian Nightingale


Ice Cream - Poem by Persian Nightingale

A sleepy little village, quiet
You look out the window
Daydreaming
In your eyes disquiet

So many sleepless nights
I have dreams about you
I must get some sleep
To dream you true

I awaken at dawn
To find you beside me
I'm still half asleep
Keep me awake blue sea

Being soul mate
This is
More than a pipe dream
Oh dreamy blue eyes
Give me an ice cream!

(2008/12/19)


Comments about Ice Cream by Persian Nightingale

  • Rookie Karin Anderson (sorry can't vote or comment) . (8/9/2009 8:38:00 AM)

    Persian, when I found the title Ice Cream I knew it would be a special poem. I treat for you to bring
    you some solace for loving so much. Beautifully written. 10 Karin Anderson (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Little Morning Star (12/21/2008 2:44:00 AM)

    I'm startled with the ending..
    nice work.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 14 Points Reihaneh Jalalian (12/20/2008 2:57:00 AM)

    your poem really made me laugh. a really nice start with a wonderful ending. beautiful (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 275 Points C. P. Sharma (12/19/2008 6:07:00 AM)

    I love the dreamy blue eyes more than ice cream.
    CP (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tsira Goge (12/19/2008 2:12:00 AM)

    This is pleasant to me sad poems on loneliness... Very beautifully write, Nightingale..10
    Tsira (Report) Reply

  • Rookie M M (12/19/2008 2:01:00 AM)

    When the world becomes all sweetness... Very beautiful! 10! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Estrella Baldemosa (12/19/2008 12:57:00 AM)

    romantic...i love it. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Chitra - (12/19/2008 12:36:00 AM)

    I must get some sleep
    To dream you true, lovely lines
    hope this dreamy icecream never ever melts (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 9 Points Linda Winchell (12/18/2008 6:23:00 PM)

    While Ice Cream is fattening, this is a sweet poem to lick your lips upon! Ten, Linda (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, December 18, 2008

Poem Edited: Sunday, December 21, 2008


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