Identity! Poem by Dheeraj

Identity!

Rating: 4.5


Truest is my identity
Truest I'm here.
I'll not shy, I'll not pretend
Coz now I don't have any fear.

Fear, That sucked me up
Was a dark black cloud to me ever
Once ruled me as a ruling king
Forced me to be his slaved queen forever.

He thought to possess me
And to leave me never.
Was darkest of all the darkness
Became a Rival lover.

His strength was really promising
Capturing me in my veins
But was actually unaware
Of my psychic powers and brains.

I came to my real I
And they all (fears) became the greatest lie
Me became the truest truth
Evil fears will surely die.

Wednesday, November 22, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: identity
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
We all encounter fears in our lives. Here the poem deals the fight against the the fear and regaining the true identity!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 13 October 2020

Fear, That sucked me up Was a dark black cloud to me ever Once ruled me as a ruling king Forced me to be his slaved queen forever. Fear and the dark cloud- very great poem. tony

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Robert Murray Smith 20 April 2018

Fear is in all of us. Your poem deals with this well.+++10

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Seema Chowdhury 14 December 2017

Expressive and thought provoking. keep it up!

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Dheeraj 14 December 2017

Thank you very much! !

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Dr Antony Theodore 11 December 2017

I came to my real I And they all (fears) became the greatest lie Me became the truest truth Evil fears will surely die. i am not afraid......... i have discovered the truth........... only great people like Ghandhi has said such words.. reading through his my experiments with the truth.... it reveals his identity. so also u write at your young age that u have discovered your truth. congratulations dear young poet. tony

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Dheeraj 11 December 2017

Thank you so much for your understanding and words! ! !

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