Idolater Poem by Dorothy Kardas, Psy.D. Th.D.

Idolater

Rating: 5.0


Blind adorer of false gods
Reckless idol-maker
Money maker
Power or fame
Grabby taker
Habitual faker:
Capturer, asset-stripper
Calculating captor,
And manipulating actor.
Captive for being vainly active;
Trapped in vicious disorder
Marginalizing the One and Only God
Sinking deeper into
Uncontrollable religious deviation -
A member of irreligious civilization.
Captive in moral lack of order -
Enabler of society's nasty disorder;
A punisher, executing a sentence on oneself
Inflicter of one's own pointless pain,
For the sin of impiety
And idolatry insobriety,
One is ill-fated relinguisher of hope -
In desperate need for favors
Of the One and Only Worshipful God.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jeyrene Rhodes 29 October 2008

Great poem, packed with meaning... love especially the insightful line 'captive for being vainly active'. Wonderful use of satire. Dr. Kardas, love your play with words.

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Frank P. Lester 20 May 2009

I would add that you are not only gifted satirist but also a master of educational provocation! Thank you for stirring my mind and soul! 10!

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Jay Pappalardo 17 April 2009

A brilliant master of satire! Meaningful, witty, pithy and zesty! First this verse made me think and then it brought about a hearty burst of laughter! Thanks! 10! ! !

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Vernon Eaker 01 February 2009

Powerful and poignant, well written.

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Jenifer Loring 03 November 2008

Couldn't agree with you more! We're very tired of the 'grabby takes', money and power hungry 'habitual fakers' who are demoralizing our society. A very good analysis Dr. Kardas...wish more people would step back and take a good, long look at their OWN ugliness (called sin) . Really stirred up a lot of emotions reading your new editions. God Bless...Jen

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Sathyanarayana M V S 31 October 2008

a fast moving action packed poem with very good rhymes......10

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