If Ever You Want Me Poem by Dónall Dempsey

If Ever You Want Me

Rating: 5.0


If ever you
want me

...to go

only tell me so
& I'll go

quietly as the melting snow.

If ever you
don't love me

...anymore

only tell me so
& I'll go

quietly as a fading rainbow

& cry

someplace far from here
(you need never know)

I quiet
as melted snow

...a dead rainbow.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

awww.....that is very sweet. But the way Janice's comment sounds, it sounds like she loves you more than anything. I hope you two are happy with each other. -Brie

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Janice Windle 30 October 2008

I shall always want you never to go, never to fade, always to hold me, warm as Amalfi sun, real as a thunderclap, strong as a gale of laughter, in your net, that catches the rocce sporgete of my life's avalanches, always beside me, my lover, my supporter, my inspiration and my friend.

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Onelia Avelar 29 October 2008

This is so simple and beautiful... I add it to my favorites.

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Dónall Dempsey

Dónall Dempsey

Curragh Camp, Co. Kildare, Eire.
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