If I Could...I Would... Poem by Tork Souad Diana

If I Could...I Would...

Rating: 4.5


If I could die early
I would kneel to Death
And I would ask fairly
If I could be your breath.

If I could be your angel
I would wrap you in my wings
And I would tell the angle
Where Orpheus pulls his strings.

If I could hold you tight
You wouldn’t feel alone
Cause I would stay all night
Till the last dream’s been blown.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Carmen Johnson 24 March 2009

Very good, but do you realize that in the second stanza last line you wrote angle..instead of angel. Unless that is what you meant.

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