hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 23,705 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

If I fail,


I wish to return
Home and turn
All memories
Back with small babies

What shall I find?
New hope of some kind
Love angle and tolerance
Peace shall have chance

I shall live with nature
Go out for securing future
Canvass for no cruelty
Against all that has been created by almighty

Why do I hope?
And expect not to flop
I find future in their eyes
Let me put in some efforts and try

I was totally out
From nature's contact
Now I come back again
To feel the same pain

If I fail
Please find tail
Take new route
But start mission if that suits

Submitted: Tuesday, July 29, 2014

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  • Gold Star - 23,705 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/29/2014 5:12:00 PM)

    I like it


    'Mugzie' Salvador James Tinajero5 minutes ago
    I dont have kids, but could of had two right now. Sometimes I wish it happend, I feel like I would of had that reason and motivation Id be in a better place than i am now. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 23,705 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (7/29/2014 5:12:00 PM)

    I like it


    Allen Lucas4 minutes ago
    I like its message, and I empathize with it. Keep writing.
    Comment +1
    babies


    Jack Babcock3 minutes ago
    I did not understand this poem.
    I like it


    Allen Lucas4 minutes ago
    I like its message, and I empathize with it. Keep writing.
    Comment +1 (Report) Reply

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