If Life Poem by samantha thuringer

If Life



if life was like a ballon do you wish you could fly
if life was like a lolliepop are you as sweet as they say
if you had one wish would it come true
if there really is a life will it end with me and you

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gurpreet S. 15 November 2008

nice approach.. but i feel there are some mistakes.. shudnt it be IF instead of IS? ? not sure.. but soul of the poem is good.

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