Jayne Davies

Rookie - 155 Points (5th October 1960 / Abercynon, Rhondda Cynon Taff)

If Only A Dream - Poem by Jayne Davies

Sometimes I feel it's all a dream,
Still can't believe your gone,
That maybe one day you'll walk through the door,
But life goes on and on.

I find it hard to realise,
You won't return one day,
I must have loved you oh so much,
To make me feel this way.

I walk along a crowded street,
I thought you called my name,
To turn and find it's someone else,
Sweet memories playing games.

If only this was just a dream,
I'd see you once again,
Maybe one day in heaven you'll wait,
We'll walk together then.


Comments about If Only A Dream by Jayne Davies

  • Rookie - 155 Points Jayne Davies (7/17/2013 10:10:00 AM)

    Thanks Heather! Glad you like it x (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 9,895 Points Heather Wilkins (7/16/2013 2:16:00 AM)

    a beautifully written poem. yearning to be together again. but we are forced to say heaven can wait. I love the contents of this poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 155 Points Jayne Davies (7/3/2013 3:02:00 PM)

    Thank you! So glad you like it! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,245 Points Pradip Chattopadhyay (7/3/2013 3:25:00 AM)

    a soulful yearning to walk together once more, beautifully versed. Another irrestible offer from Jayne. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, July 3, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 3, 2013


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