Treasure Island

Aparna Mirajkar


IF Sometime


If sometimes you feel, that I am being weird,

Hold me close, I might be needing your hug

If sometimes you feel that I am being too argumentative

Let me win, I might be disturbed

If sometimes you feel, that I don’t obey u

Convince me like a child, perhaps I might want you to pamper me

If sometimes you feel, that I am talking a lot

Listen to me, I might have spent a lonely day

If sometimes you feel, that I am not on speaking terms with you

Give me time to accept the new decision you might have made.

If sometimes you feel that I am losing interest in you

Tell me how much you love me, I might be wanting to hear it.

If sometimes you feel that I am getting too possessive about you,

Don’t get irritated, it might just mean that I love you, and cant stay without you.

And if sometimes you feel, that I have grown old and irritating

Don’t leave me, don’t curse me, perhaps I might need you and your love the most.

Submitted: Wednesday, June 04, 2008
Edited: Tuesday, January 24, 2012

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  • Rema Prasanna (6/13/2008 4:51:00 AM)

    Meaningful write.... i can feel a heart really in need of love, care and support. good one..
    Rgs
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  • Rani Turton (6/6/2008 8:07:00 AM)

    I liked this poem a lot, would have preferred the 'u' to be written as 'you' but that's a personal standpoint, makes for readability which is what I feel. (Report) Reply

  • Kesav Easwaran (6/4/2008 6:50:00 AM)

    you need his love most and he too yours...a love poem that conveys pure and sincere love...remember my previous comment, aparna! ...your talent has started showing! *10* (Report) Reply

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