If You Could. Poem by Fay Slimm

If You Could.

Rating: 5.0


If there was room
for one more
in my bed,
I would ditch
teddy and choose
you instead
.
Then if you could
sleep with me
like before,
I would
never ask for
anything more.

If you could
bake cakes of
stardust for bread
But you were
not there
I would
stay unfed.

That is how much
my heart rates
you the best.
If you could
love me then
I'd dream the rest.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Rani Turton 30 November 2009

Very sweet. Speaks a simple language known to all poets. Thanks Fay.

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David Harris 16 November 2009

Fay, that was really beautiful. I loved it. Top marks and thanks for sharing it with us my friend. Hugs David

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Daniel Kempson 16 November 2009

Very nice Fay so nicely said 10 Daniel

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Carol Gall 16 November 2009

wow fay very very beautiful 10

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Tom Balch 16 November 2009

The wanting, once again, lovely piece Fay, I do however feel soory for Ted lol regards Tom 10/10

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Fay Slimm

Fay Slimm

in Cornwall U.K.
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