Dr. Antony Theodore

If You Die Before Me - Poem by Dr. Antony Theodore

If you die before me
I would jump down into your grave
And hug you so innocently
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Topic(s) of this poem: love

Comments about If You Die Before Me by Dr. Antony Theodore

  • Rookie - 402 Points Asma Zenjali (11/26/2015 9:11:00 AM)

    if you die before me such an nice and well shosen title, your poem is full of passion and loyalty it remind me of one i have read once called poor ghost good thank for sharing. (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 172 Points Lyndsay Ayliffe (11/26/2015 6:55:00 AM)

    really beautiful poem, love the way it flows! (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 936 Points Shah Surja (11/25/2015 7:36:00 AM)

    Meaning of poetry, philosophy and vision, the three sides. Conversations with a poet's soul. Or the girlfriend sitting. And immerse yourself in God's love.

    Wonderful and beautiful poem. thank you (y) (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 88 Points Charles Dickens (11/24/2015 3:02:00 PM)

    Very touching and emotionally charged. It is a subject that gets closer to the heart and mind as we age with our partner. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 50,058 Points Akhtar Jawad (11/24/2015 8:15:00 AM)

    To me it appears that someone is seeing his beloved close to death, and the thought that he is going to lose his beloved has shocked him so much that he has become insane. He doesn't know how he will pass his remaining days without his beloved. On one hand he wants to give some will power to one who is about to die, to fight with death, on the other hand he promises the beloved, he shall follow and join him/her soon, She/He will not be alone there for a long time. I don't know whether I am right or wrong. The poem is heart touching. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 359 Points Marianne Reninger (11/23/2015 7:00:00 AM)

    You made me sincerely believe you had lost a loved one. I felt your pain and your ardor. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 285 Points Rigzen Angmo (11/22/2015 4:46:00 PM)

    This is really beautiful :) it just made me smile! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 26 Points Grace Swygert (11/22/2015 4:18:00 PM)

    Even though I'm too young to know about love, I think this was very beautiful! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 396 Points Kirti Sharma (11/22/2015 1:47:00 AM)

    i liked the title of this beautiful poem..
    no pain.. but love... love can always stay no matter what..
    thank you for sharin it.. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 123 Points Kaushal Saboo (11/21/2015 9:59:00 PM)

    Great write sir!!!! It shows true love is just unconditional!! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 378 Points Angelique Rigas (11/21/2015 4:39:00 PM)

    What a beautiful poem; it's absolutely amazing. At once passionate and loving, and even perhaps heartbreaking as the lovers are separated. Then there is that beautiful expression of hope in the end:
    Shall I wait at dusk and dawn
    with such desire and passion
    To reach you one day
    in your world of happiness. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 287 Points James Joseph (11/21/2015 3:28:00 PM)

    Profound! I had to read it a few times for it's meaning to really begin to reveal itself to my heart. I think this is the kind of poem which always tells something new each time it is read...the best kind! Very good. (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,548 Points Shahin Latif (11/21/2015 12:19:00 PM)

    Very lovely poem. I love this poem. Your hopeful dream is so innocent. A lot of thanks poet Dr. Antony Theodore. Be well always. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,454 Points Anamta Ali Pasha (11/19/2015 7:49:00 AM)

    Its a very nice poem..I like it..But i think you must have to think a positive response...but well done..keep it up..
    Anamta Ali Pasha(Annie) (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,180 Points Vaidyanathan Ram (11/19/2015 5:41:00 AM)

    An heart is a symbol of love, where love is all the above, liked very much. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,400 Points Anitah Muwanguzi (11/19/2015 3:20:00 AM)

    'hug you so innocently'
    hahahahah nothing innocent about the poem. Epic poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 268 Points Young Church Poetry (11/19/2015 2:54:00 AM)

    A very beautiful poem full of hope, it speaks about death yet so positive and beautiful. I love it wow, brilliant piece. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,083 Points The chinmay (11/17/2015 8:59:00 AM)

    wow what a poetry....very sentimental with a string of love n hope....great poetry......I am not a great poet like u...but what I undrstnd....I touches my heart deeply (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 197 Points Yinka Meander (11/15/2015 9:35:00 PM)

    This is awesome! i c a string of love nondetachable as i read this poem. Great Poetry Dr. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,399 Points Free Bird (11/15/2015 9:14:00 AM)

    A sentimental well written poem.
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    If you die before me
    I would jump down into your grave
    And hug you so innocently
    That angels will become jealous. (Report) Reply

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