If You Ever Loved Me, Poem by VIPINS PUTHOORAN
If You Ever Loved Me,
Stab me with a dagger
Over my wounded heart
And crush my fragile mind
With your cruel words,
If you relish it for a momment;
For I'm not doing any atrocities
Unto your peaceful life......
For I'm loving your heart
By my every breath
In my every inch of the Soul.
Stab me then with a dagger,
If you relish it for a momment.
Oh! you were ever such a beautiful girl,
When I loved you.....
Oh! you were ever such a beautiful girl,
When you loved me.....
Each day seemed to us same
When we loved each other.
No other girls was there as beautiful as you!
No other girls was there as beautiful as you!
I don't want to love you anymore,
Nor I wish to be in your side again
As I hate a person who avoids my life.
But I loved her in my whole heart and soul,
When she was longed only for me.
real love..you can not continue loving...who is avoiding your eyes...though the girl..is very beautiful...but you once loved her..is there any influence of neruda? .am i right? ..it equates the poem of neruda...a nice poem..gr8888...keeep writing..
if it was love she'll come back if it wasnt meant to be let her go their are many other people out there who like us as we are and not for who we are pretending to be anyways nice poems
Love is a dagger... And you wrote it so well, dear Vipins, though heartache is plain for all eyes to read. May you smile and be happy again... Stay well and remember all wounds heal with time.
A powerfully worded poem of lost love, Deeply moving to read of your anguish leading to you to deep anger. A memorable poem. You are welcome to visit mine
Love the one who has been longing for you. But why should you hate the one who is not pulled towards you? The line, 'stab me...dagger' recalls me the lines of Shakespeare's tragedies. Cheers! There is a violent sea of emotions!
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4/24/2024 4:20:48 AM # 1.0.0.1119
A powerful write Vipins, you demonstrate a great range of emotion in your work.