If You Leave Me Poem by Ovi Odiete
If You Leave Me
if you stay with me today
as we were entwined yesterday
and then leave me tomorrow
i will find you
i will go with the wind
in search of you
i will run like a cheetah
and fly like an eagle
till i get in touch with you
if you leave me still
and make me bare
what about the old days
with those exhausting love
in the heat of the moment
you said you love me
i cling to you and hold you so
but if you leave me still
then i will rest my case.
thank you heather, i really appreciate you, please read my other poems and leave your comment.
Speaks of love. More stanzas will portray more explanations, so i take it you are still working on it.
The writer expresses himself fluently while writing this love poem. An enjoyable one.
This speaks to me as a poem of young all-encompassing love. I like the imagery and the flow and movement. Nice work!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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4/25/2024 6:38:03 AM # 1.0.0.1119
well written filled with feeling good imagery I will go with the wind in search of you