If You Weren'T With Me Poem by Praneet Bhavan

If You Weren'T With Me

Rating: 3.5


I'm sure this would've been aboring trip
if you weren't with me

No matter what goes on before my eyes
you are all i see

I hear shouts from the crowd around us
but all i care about is you being happy

The time passes ever so quick
as long as i am with thee!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

Good piece indeed... you could have added a few more lines as 'SHE' is deemed to be so special.It is nice that Praneet you are very caring...

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Egi David Perdana 27 April 2008

from different people, I LOVE this poems, this poems like to different people amazing and wonderful

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Egi David Perdana 27 April 2008

from different people, I LOVE this poems, this poems like to different people amazing and wonderful

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