Ill Be Out Poem by ashley bisesi

Ill Be Out



Soon i'll be out of this place,
Soon your going to miss me being around.

But once i graduate,
From this depressing state.

You wont be able to keep me down,
So embrace me while you can.

Because soon i will be gone.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Paul Cutting 15 February 2010

Dearest Ashley, Its my pleasure to read your poetic sorrow, and I hope you find your way out of this desperation of inspiration, to a inspiring and loving situation. Please take my love as a blanket till you find your true love in this live that will give you true security and warmth. Paul C.

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Antonio Liao 11 February 2010

Oh! mine....what a parting tears flow in the slippery rough swollen hands it's gone.....very beautiful piece of please 'Don’t Go'...thank you...God bless a Star and a 10+++++

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Amy Marie 10 February 2010

Yet another poem of yours with a fascinating theme...

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