Ill Do It Ill Jump Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

Ill Do It Ill Jump

Rating: 5.0


The wind is cool,
cooler than I stand alone,
at the top, of this bridge.
It is a long way down,
rescue vehicles, they wave, is beacon.
hundreds of people, police.
There are none, up here with me, none.
I think I will leave, come back tomorrow.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Angelic Warrior 14 June 2009

suicide.....always an option....but is it the best? ....i think it would feel to much like giving up, even when life is at its worst.....well its evident that you didn't jump, I wouldn't suggest that you go back tomorrow though.....so the title doesn't really work anymore, you lie you lie; P 10++ btw there are much easier ways than to jump of a bridge...ouch

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James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By
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