Illusions Poem by Dianna Nally

Illusions



I live in a world of illusions
A world of peoples delusions
Where the bells ring upside down
And the people dress like clowns

When it rains it comes from the ground
And rainbows wear a frown
Where butterflies have no wings
And where the angels never sing

This world of my illusions
never comes to conclusions
So I will never say good-bye
I'll just end this poem with 'Hi'

by Dianna Nally
and
Debbie Wagoner
7/13/09

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
ppp sss 15 July 2009

Nice co-write you two! Any thought on adding the word 'up'? And the people dress up like clowns Just seems more natural to the flow, but otherwise a well blended piece.

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Dianna Nally

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Bakersfield CA
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