dalton lakin

What do you think this poem is about?

im lost

lost in thought
lost in love
lost in death
lost without love
lost lost lost
im always lost
lost in with the love im with
lost in this world
lost in the way of life
lost in the way we are
lost in the way of crooks
lost lost lost
why is everbody lost
in this world im lost

dalton lakin
Submitted: Wednesday, January 28, 2009

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  • Marsha Mallow (5/12/2011 12:24:00 PM)

    My mommy told me when I get lost... to stay were i am and she'll come find me.

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  • Saadiya Fourie (11/28/2010 8:34:00 PM)

    either way your lost even if you find something that you though would give you direction

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  • Marina Gasbey (7/20/2010 9:52:00 AM)

    Lost... a worded packed with meaning...

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  • Fabin Jiby (5/25/2010 5:45:00 AM)

    i'm a person like you who lost everything forever.....but i dont know still people like us live......what makes it so? ? ? ? ? ? ? some get depressed, but som goahead...but why? ? ? ? ? ? ? god is too cruel

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  • Fabin Jiby (5/25/2010 5:45:00 AM)

    i'm a person like you who lost everything forever.....but i dont know still people like us live......what makes it so? ? ? ? ? ? ? some get depressed, but som goahead...but why? ? ? ? ? ? ? god is too cruel

    0 person liked.
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  • Keiannie Martin (3/22/2010 1:54:00 PM)

    i like this poems it real

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  • i love u babe (tandi) (3/16/2010 12:54:00 PM)

    i love this poem its real but maby u can look deeper

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  • Adeline Foster (3/30/2009 12:54:00 PM)

    So sad to be lost. Maybe you are looking in the wrong places. Please read mine and I hope some of the answers you will find there.
    Adeline

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  • Twessy Desir (3/12/2009 10:30:00 AM)

    I lost the love of my life and it's my fault, I do everything I could to retrieve hard

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