...Im Tired Poem by Dislocated Heart

...Im Tired

Rating: 3.9


i miss you...
i miss your hugs.
i miss when you pretend to love me.

im tired, babe.
this is it.
those bumps,
those tears,
those days,
when i feel the fear.

its all over.
i just gotta say,
we had a good date.
we had a good run.
but we came to the end of the road where we must part.
but im not ready.
not yet.
everytime i feel closer.
im a mile more away.
i can hardly see you.
babe, i miss you.
i really love you.

but he can have you.
im tired of defending,
im tired of showing,
im tired of writing.

is that why you fell in love?
my words?
well, this will certainly cut you deep.
you never loved me.
you dont have to pretend. i know.
its over and done with.
good night and goodbye.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Puppy Luver72196 20 January 2008

Wow! Fine work of poetry

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kandii koted babe 20 January 2008

wow u really r truly lost in love with her..

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Chaotic Life - Curly M. 02 February 2008

GREAT POEM justin one of my favorites love it...your awesome voted 10/10 ...im tired too,

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Very sad, the pain comes through in these words.

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Goddess Of Love 06 February 2008

aww this is really sad, can relate to this in the past. like the emotions in it. great work and thanks for looking at my poems.

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Ashraful Musaddeq 09 September 2008

The theme is confined and nice.

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, aryaindia 03 August 2008

The craving of a crooning heart is justified here in your beautiful attempt to go past the agony of living a life without a dear one. arya

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Zooey Gillespie 13 July 2008

This is great. I can see where your coming from. Keep up the good work.

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Wendy Collison 28 March 2008

Thats a very good poem! hope you find a good girl for yourself!

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Day Dreamer 05 March 2008

this is sad and i can relate...but im a gril...lol

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