hasmukh amathalal

Gold Star - 53,114 Points (17/05/1947 / Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India)

Imagine World About - Poem by hasmukh amathalal

Imagine, world is so beautiful
For readers, writers, bankers and fools
There is enough of space
The cast and religion has no place

Life can never be worry free
Even if you are sitting under tree
Fully laden with fruits
Still you fail to see it and eat

Almighty sent you with only one mission
Leave happily and create no confusion
Life is not for inviting tension
Work honestly but not with excessive compassion

The work can be shared with joy
With staff and superiors to enjoy
Task or no task, it shall be complete
Mind must work but soul need not compete

“What if whole world is gained” I wrote many times
“Soul or life is lost without being maintained”
No one may be able to answer, but seek it honestly
You shall lead life easily and happily

You have responsibility
To support children and family
Do not do such work that takes life away
Balance the sheet but keep face with smiles to stay


Comments about Imagine World About by hasmukh amathalal

  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/31/2014 8:29:00 PM)

    Great job...!

    sumaya sheikh abukar25 minutes ago
    Deep and Thoughtful....! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/31/2014 8:28:00 PM)

    Great

    East Black23 minutes ago
    really enjoyed this because of it's simplicity and your use off words, nice!
    Comment +1 (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/31/2014 8:28:00 PM)

    Intriguing

    Brad Ker22 minutes ago
    Forestall your own merriment to allow others to have the same level of contentment as you, interesting sentiment.
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  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/31/2014 8:27:00 PM)

    Could use some revision

    Billy Loving23 minutes ago
    Good effort (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 53,114 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/31/2014 8:02:00 PM)

    Imagine, world is so beautiful
    For readers, writers, bankers and fools (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, March 31, 2014

Poem Edited: Tuesday, April 1, 2014


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