Immortal Moment Poem by Autumn Winds

Immortal Moment

Rating: 5.0


I can hear the whispered words
Of those who lie forgotten
But the message rings on still
Watching a world of white
Dissipate slowly
And where the darkness lies
We all lie too
Where our light houses shine at us
But they're too far away
And in this moment lies eternity
Somewhere forever
Kept locked with in our treasure chests
Where our eyes meet each others
And look away to the moon
This is our immortal moment
Our forever
But even that doesn't last long enough
And all too fast the world settles down
And time starts again
But our immortal moment with remain

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Khairul Ahsan 30 July 2013

This poem deserves 10/10

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Khairul Ahsan 23 July 2013

Where our light houses shine at us But they're too far away And in this moment lies eternity Somewhere forever Nice, poetic vision of eternity.

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Autumn Winds

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Sanfrancisco, California
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