HALT-listen when I speak
fear me, trust me
place your life in my hands
honor me, respect me
salute when I pass
hate me, despise me
and I won't care
you are nothing to me
I am an immortal soldier
HALT-listen when I speak
I fought, I won
my scars are many
I shot, I killed
the dreams still come
hate me, despise me
and I won't care
you are nothing to me
I am an immortal soldier
HALT-listen when I speak
I loved, so love me
I still can feel
I forgave, so forgive me
a sorry is all you need
I hated, so hate me
but I won't care
you are nothing to me
I am an immortal soldier
and no one will see my tears
That is a very good poem, there are many ways the readers can take this poem because it goes into many depths. Very good read, can definitly relate to it. Keep on writing.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I like this alot enemies fear a soldier, civilians trust honor respect, fellow soldiers salute. I like it. I don't understand the immortal concept. But like the last person who commented said, this poem can be interpreted in many different ways.