Immortality Poem by wardha jawdat

Immortality

Rating: 3.0


He rode planes;
Traipsing across the heavens
Dancing invisible waltzes with
Angelic dolphins.
He rode planes;
His escape from mortality
Complete and whole
Body and soul
He rode planes
Mortals in his vision few
Wispy fairies aplenty
The world of everchanging vistas
Of dreamy cottoncandy characters
Where every face wore a smile
And every sunbeam a wish fulfilled
He rode planes;
He lived a dream,
He died young,
He never knew
The ugliness
The pettiness
The disillusionment
Of those
Below.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Greenwolfe 1962 01 September 2008

When a writer as great as this puts pen to paper, the trees rejoice. For the know they shall not die in vain. A 10. GW62

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Wardha I hope you are doin' fine-indeed an alarming absence Anxious rehan

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The world of everchanging vistas Of dreamy cottoncandy characters Where every face wore a smile And every sunbeam a wish fulfilled It is truly an immortalizing breath of life Best- rehan

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Chan Jee 06 April 2008

Hi, , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , , jawdat Wardha you have deep emotions.you have also broad vision.i appreciate you. please read my poems also and give your true remarks thanks bye

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