Immutable Desire Poem by Eila Mahima Jaipaul

Immutable Desire

Rating: 5.0


lying beneath
feeling your dust of skin
there's presented
in cobalt reflection
a sense of time
and its seamless texture.
rampant loss in it echoes
as all becomes silenced
by heartbeats

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 23 August 2006

Eila...HAVEN'T SEEN YOU ON LINE LATELY...HOPE ALL IS WELL WITH YOU THIS IS A GORGEOUS PIECE OF SUCCINCT MASTERY...THE IMAGERY TELLS ALL & YOU HAVE ACCOMPLISHED A MOST MERITWORTHY SLICE OF VERSE HERE....''''''''''''''''''''''''''''''FJR

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