Captain Cur

Rookie - 340 Points (England)

Imploding Thoughts - Poem by Captain Cur

Twisted reasons
internally turn
into the logic
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Comments about Imploding Thoughts by Captain Cur

  • Rookie Frank James Davis (2/19/2013 1:59:00 AM)

    Perceptive.
    Especially appreciated the lines: ...in words that tend/ to worship themselves...
    Worthwhile offering! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 10,385 Points Lyn Paul (2/19/2013 12:01:00 AM)

    Very well written. Particularly like the twisted reason. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 341 Points Joseph Anderson (2/18/2013 1:00:00 PM)

    Hi Capt..-This happens to me all the time.A great exposing of how our thoughts
    and ideas implode, even as we are working with them. Great to see you are
    still at at (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 264 Points Ellias Anderson Jr. (2/17/2013 12:08:00 PM)

    a nice one Captain. we captains like to create unique works, and our great ones like you dear captain, always makes the best. fantastic write!
    Well done
    young Ellias. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 922 Points Shahzia Batool (2/17/2013 10:23:00 AM)

    this also is a clever creation, isn't it? (Report) Reply








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