Impossibility Poem by Sandra Feldman

Impossibility

Rating: 5.0


Ah, to be able to capture,
The Essence of all Time,
In a single Verse,
Would that not be bigger,
Than the whole Universe?

Friday, May 6, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: poetry
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Roseann Shawiak 09 May 2016

Sandra, you leave the impossibilities within your words, yet your thoughts entice us to think outside the box, looking for the possibilities to find a place in the whole universe. Great poem, thought-provoking to this always curious poet, looking to travel beyond the normal and ordinary. Thank you for luring me into that unknown atmosphere, it's exhilarating and fun! ! RoseAnn

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Susan Williams 08 May 2016

It is hard to conceptualize about the dimension of the universe, the length and breadth of eternity, the thoughts of an infant. It would, however, be a good thing for the soul to try to do. Those five lines are breath-taking, challenging, and pure essence of Sandra! ! !

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Chuy Amante 07 May 2016

picturing god's grand universe means you just put it all in your purse powerful you are allness you are tapped in

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Kelly Kurt 06 May 2016

Very few things are impossible. That is one of them

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