In A Nest Poem by kite remedy

In A Nest

Rating: 5.0


One day when I flew
for skies so new,
I left my home with no clue..

So world was way tough,
out of my thought.
I did think that I have lost..

I strayed by the wind
to an unknown place,
and rested my wings for a while..

The song of a child
beneath this tree,
was lulling me to my sleep..

And then,
could I understand,
why there's a place that is called 'home'.
So when you think that you're none,
you would surely
have a place
to be...

So please Tomorrow,
don't walk so slow.
I've been waiting for you to come..

I knew I had left,
on a branch, in a nest,
a bit of my,
my happiness..

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Subbaraman N V 03 December 2008

Yes- home is a temple! Good wreite!

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Dr Hitesh Sheth 30 November 2008

Like a kite flying from tresure chest i flew to found my mate my heart's guest I found him My souls floats in a sea of rest Good work.

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Carol Lovelady 28 November 2008

To venture off from the safety of what you have known as home is scary..but exciting..home is the beginning of your happiness. Enjoyed the reading and understanding the new adventure out of the safety of the nest into a bright big world- the comfort of your home is never too far away.

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Aijaz Asif 28 November 2008

its very beautiful and inspirig write with very strong use of metaphors and message, true so true their's no place as beautiful and peaceful as like home...thanks for sharing 10++++ for this marvellous write... rgds asif

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I love this its very different i love how you expressed happiness with a branch and a nest.. Great imagination Krista

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