Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie

Rookie - 42 Points (4th June 1976 / Benin)

In Beauty - Poem by Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie

In beauty we dwell
Blooming stark from spring,
Who moves with flight,
Seasons the air
In our abode
Concrete as gleam
Novelised with boons
Built in rock-like base
To glow as Eden.
Our hands knitted
With bond fixed glue-like,
Rendered firm as steel.

Close as we nurture
Our hearts ring-mutual,
Like in the garden
To sprout as flowers free
To ascend and sing.
No how the earthquakes,
The volcanoes,
The hurricanes,
The tsunamis,
The forest fire,
Can ever sever
The cord of our love.

Comments about In Beauty by Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie

  • Bernard Snyder Bernard Snyder (9/29/2015 9:20:00 PM)

    I must say this is very different, yet just as beautiful. Great job! (Report) Reply

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  • Edward Kofi Louis Edward Kofi Louis (9/29/2015 3:03:00 PM)

    Novelised with boons! With the muse of love and life. Nice work. (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh T A Ramesh T A (9/29/2015 12:21:00 PM)

    Love will surpass all hurdles when it blooms strong! (Report) Reply

  • Ovi-enita Odiete Ovi-enita Odiete (9/29/2015 5:48:00 AM)

    This is a beautiful poem about Love.. (Report) Reply

  • Anil Kumar Panda Anil Kumar Panda (9/29/2015 2:19:00 AM)

    Nicely done. Love will exist for ever. (Report) Reply

  • Dorothy- A. Holmes Dorothy- A. Holmes (5/17/2015 10:19:00 AM)

    A lovely verse as I stroll through your garden seeing and feeling as my senses are teased! A pleasure to read.
    Dorothy...A Poet Who Loves To Sing (Report) Reply

  • Mugano Paul (12/29/2009 7:51:00 AM)

    TRULY NICE but the line that says
    'Can ever sever The cord of our love' causes me to disagree.

    In this riot, i pray that nothing ever breaks the cord of love in the mighty name of Jesus. Time has come to have the right foundations of the GODLY institution built on the solid ROCK; Jesus.

    How is this my dear?

    B the way do you ever read any of my poems? (Report) Reply

  • Kasthuri Velu (11/16/2009 5:13:00 AM)

    Nice poem.........well written. (Report) Reply

  • Janae Lagge (10/28/2009 9:23:00 AM)

    That is very pretty! Keep it up! :) (Report) Reply

  • Rex Mathew Mathew (10/24/2009 1:31:00 AM)

    The poem delivers a very romantic and creative view on love. It is wonderful how you can uncover love and fantasy out of nature. Nice imagery. Nice poem. I like your style. (Report) Reply

  • Jo E (10/8/2009 8:24:00 AM)

    It different to other poems. Its good! :) Keep it up! (Report) Reply

  • Opeyemi Borisade Opeyemi Borisade (9/29/2009 9:30:00 AM)

    Different from the normal, coded, thought provoking, creative! Good job.
    You might not ming seeing some of mine. Comment, criticize etc. I'll appreciate it.

    Regards (Report) Reply

  • Jester's P Jester's P (9/28/2009 11:22:00 PM)

    In beauty we dwell
    Blooming stark from spring, ... yes its true- the image says beauty as blooming from spring (flowers, green leaves, grasses) fullness of nature.

    nice imagery...

    however in the last part of the poem are nature's furry.
    and the truth again, 'love' is beyond all of these becasue everything has its meaning and reason. just like the typhone its can damage property and coust life but it has a deeper reason which only nature can reveal to her children, and to me it seems that we part of her that anytime she will sommond us into her bossom.

    nice poem (Report) Reply

  • * Naphright * (9/27/2009 9:50:00 PM)

    no offense meant, but i laughed when i first started reading it, i wondered where are you from, the language not understood but neat, i liked it and the end of the poem, i am waiting for my volcano love. (Report) Reply

  • Aldo Rino Smiloveux-bell (9/27/2009 3:11:00 PM)

    The love described here is very, very strong... :) . (Report) Reply

  • Stephan Mclean (9/27/2009 9:24:00 AM)

    Fantastic poem..nice style...10! (Report) Reply

  • Seema(Aanamika) 80 (9/27/2009 1:36:00 AM)

    lovely poem, I loved reading it & thanks for sharing10 (Report) Reply

  • Tharindu Atukorala (9/26/2009 9:34:00 PM)

    i like your style of writing, wish i can write just as well.. very romantic and very well written poem. (Report) Reply

  • Oche Babs (9/26/2009 6:15:00 PM)

    You are inspiring, but i think such a poem should be coloured with rymx. You are good. check out mine, pls, say exactly what u feel. thanlks (Report) Reply

  • Sarah Franks (9/26/2009 5:39:00 PM)

    Ah Afternoon Adinna, a very deep relationship poem. the ending of the poem, it Amazing and beauty it has and touching words. very deep it is. Please keep up the work (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, May 18, 2009

Poem Edited: Monday, June 20, 2011

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