In Commotion Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

In Commotion



Life makes you to cry
Even when you are happy
When meeting parents after long time
Or strangely when wife comes back after absence of good time

Tears express mental state
When you start to relate
About woes and pain from inside
You are unable to decide

My mom was such personality
Even though she was less educated and homely
I learnt a lot on emotion side
She will always cry with smile and confide

Why tears occupy great position?
When you are in commotion
Not in a position to speak single word
Except to see downward on ground

I give plus mark
With tears start
As they start to fall
I feel disappearance of hurdle or wall

In Commotion
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Outstanding. I love the first stanza. 1 minute ago by Jodekss Gloatkenf | Reply

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I give plus mark With tears start As they start to fall I feel disappearance of hurdle or wall

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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