In Confusion Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

In Confusion



Only some people are exception
They are good since inception
Go for no false pride
And not even hide

Still it is human weakness
That we present in all the cases
We feel jealous
And hopefully try to be famous

Nothing wrong
But not for song
Try and work hard
Someday it will be heard

We all know
But have same boat to go
Travel as co-passenger
With frustration and anger

I sometime smile
And think for while
It is good to feel under compulsion
After all we all live under confusion

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 October 2014

Love the spirit of humility Furrycat Tony14 minutes ago 5 stars Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 October 2014

nice Mohammed Obaid18 minutes ago i like it

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 October 2014

like it NICHOLAS SOLAR16 minutes ago if we under Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 27 October 2014

This poem is well titled! Alan Graham12 minutes ago A good effort but you have let the meaning suffer at the expense of your rhyming! What are the last two lines about? Comment 1 Comment+1 Hasmukh MehtaLess than a minute ago some compulsion we have in life.. like compromsee on thoughts, Comment +1

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 23 October 2014

Only some people are exception They are good since inception

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Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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