In Good View Poem by Bernard F. Asuncion

In Good View

Rating: 5.0


B-e brave and strong enough
U-ntil the sun sets on the horizon;
E-vening stars shine the light,
N-ever will they fade in oblivion.
A-lluring valley is seen in elegance,
V-erdant field in majestic sight;
I-sland in the silent sea
S-hows its lure in sheer delight.
T-he perfect beauty is in store, the chosen will never be blue;
A-n ever-wonderful holy city lies ahead in good view.

Thursday, December 10, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: hope
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Avid Fan 04 May 2019

Simply exceptional, sir Bernard.

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Ratnakar Mandlik 10 December 2015

The perfect beauty is in store, the chosen will never be blue An ever wonderful holy city lies ahead in good view. Excellent diction. Enjoyed the beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing.10 points.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 28 November 2017

Thanks, Ratnakar... I’ve treasured your comment for almost two years now👍👍👍

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