In Memories With You (The End) Poem by Unwritten Soul

In Memories With You (The End)

Rating: 4.4


Revisiting our past days
Holding time together
The album of memories says...
Beautiful pieces to remember
Heavenly fun and laughter
Love how we stay this way

Sunshine of the last summer
Bending time bringing serenity
Touching my hand for a first write
I'm lost in the warmth of your soul
'Listen to the rain' we made
My lips say that never to fade

Standing in a corner of the year
Bring back all past of older me
Be with you and open to see
Painting life by hand again
Deeper color immortalize me
Brushing smile in child wonderland
Wish i still there but we can't

Holding my soul tight
You listen to my first ballad
Either good or bad u never say it wrong
Closer and closer, make me strong
O September full of bonds

Our days flew drifted by the wind
Time flows like the November rain
Counting without missing a date
Three hundred sixty five days we holding on
Within the full heart of 12months not even long
Nothing went wrong but now we done

Cold winter always a sad witness
We end up in 31st December
Six feet under the white snow
Preserve memories in ice
Denying that was our last day
In memory it keeps lasting
Here in December
Never meant say for leaving
Something was missing
And I missing you already
Before say a goodbye
New years, ....
Won’t be...Never be...
The same like you
Now i walking out my life
With a full memories
Walking ahead with same steps
Along with memories

Leaving u 2010 for 2011
But something still alive
The memories with you
I just cant stop thinking
Because i am
In memories with you

-THE END-

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Carney 21 January 2011

Such a beautiful poem I understand a lot now. I really wish I had read this earlier. Such a sad poem to end 2010. You silled you heart and open your soul. The beauty anjd sadness and the rhyme and reason, you should never let go. Look forward to great and new horizons in 2011 it is there for the taking...

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Terence George Craddock 22 January 2011

'The album of memories says'... behold poetry beauty of unwritten soul 10+++ Universe Embraces Written Souls Turn album of memories holds time in our hands heart throbs paint images we ran our souls in light as we ran wet flow fingers through paint breath canvas deep colours blaze in hues shape soul gift open flowers we set flower sails on water streams sparkle seed shapes ripples ride diamond light river celebrations perfume daylight candles warm birth womb night our souls hold time in serenity star smiles illuminate light sky pulse in glow depths time space spreads shadows veils shimmer black lace spreads wind ripples beautifies bodies breath bright beauty ripe graces eyes beholders bliss embrace heaven sung melody sparkle eyes thrill flash flesh radiant blows soft whispers into comic seas angels sing joy celebrate soul maker. Dedicated to Unwritten Soul Copyright © Terence George Craddock

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Nimal Dunuhinga 23 January 2011

A beautiful canvas of an unwritten soul, bittersweet memories in its true colours and it's already framed in our hearts!

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Pranab K Chakraborty 28 January 2011

But something still alive The memories with you.. Fantastic writing with so many oft quoted lines within it, it will perhaps give fire to the poet also to live loudly after finishing 2011,12.........to its extreme. As a reader we get the force of living together inside a society, inside a home, inside an earth also. Thank you the soul, try to write yourself more and more with the love and passions of life. Regards, pranab 10++

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Kesav Easwaran 03 February 2011

beautifully refective...beautifully romantic...beautiful painting on a solid canvas

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Dev Anand 15 November 2018

The memories with you I just cant stop thinking Because i am In memories with you...how can i ever forget you and your love., a fine romantic and love poem. thank u dear poetess.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 07 September 2017

It is a beautiful poem on memories having stunning expression and nice diction. Thanks for sharing.

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 May 2016

Memories! With the muse of our past days. Thanks for sharing.

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Manonton Dalan 28 December 2015

hmmmmm...I was thinking of something then those numbers hehehheehe

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Heather Wilkins 15 August 2013

a beautiful write in memories of you. ending the year

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