In Or Out Haiku Poem by Lorraine Margueritte Gasrel Black

In Or Out Haiku

Rating: 5.0


Inside the box safe

confined content blinded square

freedom is outside

COMMENTS OF THE POEM

You can have a good giggle on me.For awhile now I have been entering the poetry.com daily haiku-of which the prize is a mousepad with the winner's haiku printed on it and comes closest to the random time that they pick.Well this morning 10/20/08 I saw a square box and I thought it was the picture I'm supposed to write about so I wrote this haiku at 4a.m.I went to submit it and the real contest picture showed up.I didn't want to waste a perfectly good haiku so I added it here to join the rest of my poetry collection.My Muse has a good sense of humour.

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