In Our Existance Poem by Makhosonke Dhlamini

In Our Existance

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We tasted the salt of our tears
saw the light when the birds craft the nest
saw the wind sweep the leave when June
is shivering in winter.

Studied the art of history
we then reach consensus
that history is science
science is philosophy

Philosophy is love of abstract and logic
theory is zig zag line in a straight form

The scholars mock us to death as they say
we are romantically blacklisted
your shame introduce you to Elder and my
marks in Epistemology and Metaphysics introduce
Me to Sibonisile, when we look at their eyes
we saw God image.

Saw the wish of certain farmer being deliver into
existence, it rained yesterday, even in house of the
woman they called a witch it rained, yesterday.
Saw roses died in the hands of soil
Saw pride in the shoulders of the man of army
guilty in his eyes.
Saw worry in the wealthy face
Heard the stomach of the lad groaning from hunger
Saw pain shake hands with joy
and faith watered the desert of life.
Saw
Time much no one knows, were too.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Siyabonga A Nxumalo 30 March 2012

Absolutely brilliant, it rained yesterday, even in the house of a women they called a witch, it rained...ngiyifunde more than 3 times already, superb stuff..lmpilo yethu inje.

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Persian Khushi 04 January 2013

Magnificent writing. Thank you for inviting me to read your work. You are most talented.

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Unwritten Soul 19 December 2012

A quality of work, you have strong mind to save as your own philosophy. Good write_Soul

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Benmosi Gomina 23 August 2012

Now I see what you mean. Nice work. I see we share the same concept of philosophy. More ink to your quill.

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Hans Vr 10 April 2012

I agree with Ernest an Siya very much. this is fantastic poetry. Well done, Makhosonke.

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Ernest Makuakua 01 April 2012

It gives me pleasure joy and motivation to read such work. It gives me what i personally call inteligence inspiration. For these words move in reality. It is powerful and wonderful

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Chris Hani Hospital (Soweto)
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