In Puerto Rico Poem by Elaine Oxamendi Vicet

In Puerto Rico

Rating: 5.0


Soft waters lapping the shores
souls sitting
minds moulded
hearts together

Quietly speaks the one voice
Quietly speaks, as hearts respond.

Passersby
Birds fly
A swimmer in the distance
Activity everywhere
Yet a still quiet moment is shared.

Little talk
spontaneous little nothing laughs
Arms circle
Comfort, warmth, abundance of care.

Dusk falls
the afternoon now spent
Skies grow grey
the waves edge closer
Less activity everywhere.

Hearts still pound.
Arms still circle.
Comfort, warmth, abundance of care.

Gentle pounding
beats the tempo of love.

Rise, its time to go.
Night now falls
the evening now spent.

Souls move
minds moulded
hearts together
care and love is there.
Arms circle
heads gently touch
hands hold
as feet move.
Love and care is there!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Hitesh Sheth 06 April 2009

When love is care is there...................true affection is also there............10+++.....

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Akram Saqib 06 April 2009

very sensible sensuous poem.explicit are the emotions especially at the end when there are moving......

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Eyan Desir 06 April 2009

EXcellent I really love the flow there this was beautiful reading Great 10+ poem keep it up

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Demar Henry 06 April 2009

Serene and Sensuous at the same time. While reading this poem i felt as if i was transported to another place. I like the imagery used to describe the surroundings; the way you said so much with so little words.

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Cynthia Onukwugha 06 April 2009

lovely poem. very peaceful,10

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Shashendra Amalshan 25 May 2009

that's a lovely piece indeed...well woven in to a poetic mattress of love..a comfortable double layer one I mean....makes me feel so at ease..thanks 10+++

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 13 April 2009

beautiful lines wonderful poem

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Yelena M. 08 April 2009

Purity and passion combined, your style is so unique in language and expression and imagery, Elaine.I feel as if transported to Puerto Rico :) Thank you. Best wishes. A.

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Chitra - 07 April 2009

the waves building up the tempo of love..resonant imagery,10+

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~ Jon London ~ 07 April 2009

So much colour used in this beautiful blend of words and scene.....like glitter falling down the page my friend....brilliant job 10+

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