sallam yassin

Bronze Star - 2,440 Points (05/06/1968 / Hargeisa, Somaliland)

In Ride Of Life - Poem by sallam yassin

Ride of dread
Mountain; is where you set
And I want to reach
But I catch only the echo of my breath

Comments about In Ride Of Life by sallam yassin

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (7/24/2013 11:58:00 AM)

    life's a climb and you will face many obstacles but when you'll reach the top the view is beautiful
    a beautiful and deep write sir (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,298 Points Robinson (7/24/2013 4:57:00 AM)

    So you are still in the valley because you are hearing the echos.
    Looking up you are destined to climb your mountain.
    But you will be breathless because of the height.
    But all life should be breathless. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,120 Points Heather Wilkins (7/23/2013 9:19:00 PM)

    sometimes a mountain is difficult to climb. a good write (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, July 23, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 24, 2013

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