sallam yassin

Bronze Star - 2,205 Points (05/06/1968 / Hargeisa, Somaliland)

In Ride Of Life - Poem by sallam yassin

Ride of dread
Mountain; is where you set
And I want to reach
But I catch only the echo of my breath


Comments about In Ride Of Life by sallam yassin

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (7/24/2013 11:58:00 AM)

    life's a climb and you will face many obstacles but when you'll reach the top the view is beautiful
    a beautiful and deep write sir (Report) Reply

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  • Veteran Poet - 1,284 Points Tarobinson1103@gmail.com Robinson (7/24/2013 4:57:00 AM)

    So you are still in the valley because you are hearing the echos.
    Looking up you are destined to climb your mountain.
    But you will be breathless because of the height.
    But all life should be breathless. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 10,072 Points Heather Wilkins (7/23/2013 9:19:00 PM)

    sometimes a mountain is difficult to climb. a good write (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, July 23, 2013

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 24, 2013


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