sallam yassin

Freshman - 1,716 Points (05/06/1968 / Hargeisa, Somaliland)

In Ride Of Life


Ride of dread
Mountain; is where you set
And I want to reach
But I catch only the echo of my breath

Submitted: Tuesday, July 23, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, July 24, 2013

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Comments about this poem (In Ride Of Life by sallam yassin )

  • Rookie - 93 Points Payal Parande (7/24/2013 11:58:00 AM)

    life's a climb and you will face many obstacles but when you'll reach the top the view is beautiful
    a beautiful and deep write sir (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 1,035 Points Thomas A Robinson (7/24/2013 4:57:00 AM)

    So you are still in the valley because you are hearing the echos.
    Looking up you are destined to climb your mountain.
    But you will be breathless because of the height.
    But all life should be breathless. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 9,695 Points Heather Wilkins (7/23/2013 9:19:00 PM)

    sometimes a mountain is difficult to climb. a good write (Report) Reply

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