Sylvia Chidi

Rookie - 120 Points (Germany)

In Sorrow - Poem by Sylvia Chidi

In sorrow
She mourns her beloved son
What's next to follow
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Comments about In Sorrow by Sylvia Chidi

  • Rookie Melissa Thompson (3/22/2009 4:20:00 PM)

    this is really good sylvia, what inspired you to write this? whatever your inspirating is, hold on to it&keep it up.....melissa (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Aijaz Asif (9/6/2008 1:11:00 PM)

    extremely good poem.....i loved it (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 10 Points Cool Soubai (7/23/2008 8:07:00 PM)

    Good poem Sylvia keep writing and i will keep reading (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Mohammad Al-kurdi (6/3/2008 3:59:00 AM)

    In sorrow
    That must be no follow
    This is the one
    Who, with borrow
    Talks about it
    Without being in a hollow

    So meaningfull poem of yours..sylvia chidi (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tony Atkins (6/25/2007 9:48:00 PM)

    that poem is my insperashon thanx i give u a coment when i put it up but heres a preveu:
    love fragiel as a rose
    hollow sorrow it douse grow
    each mineat left in life
    is equivelent to a nother knife
    and as the rose withers and dies
    so dose the harets of its admier

    i just rushed it so sory for the mistakes (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Fred Cardinal (9/5/2006 12:50:00 AM)

    i love every word of it.. it show us that the love we share is only here for a short time. (Report) Reply








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