In Space Or Spaced Out Poem by Chrissie Morris Brady

In Space Or Spaced Out

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Bones lose density without gravity

This is a serious matter, not to be taken lightly

Blood fails to reach the brain

We must bear this in mind

Space cannot be navigated by the light headed

The semi conscious, on a journey with a faint map

Think on this seriously, it is not a joke

Spaceships lost in the heavens is a hellish consequence

Sentient beings drifting half conscious is senseless

Concentrate your thoughts so that we do not scatter

Debris in the galaxies, cleverly made

And stupidly lost

Sunday, February 14, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: space
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Futility of space travel
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Chinedu Dike 14 March 2016

An insightful piece on weightlessness in outer space - the outcome of loss of gravitational pull, and its effects on humans, well articulated and insightfully penned with conviction. A lovely poem indeed. Thanks for sharing Chrissie. Please read my poem COLOSSAL MISCARRIAGE OF JUSTICE.

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Fabrizio Frosini 14 February 2016

cleverly put.. Irony is a quality of mind! Welcome at PoemHunter, Chrissie Cheers Fabrizio

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